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Resistance by ~braceletsofsmoke:iconbraceletsofsmoke:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Horror & Macabre > Open




Alone in this dark room
Spiders are spinning their webs around my heart.

Tied to an oak chair
The crows peck at my flesh.

Decaying soul
Ambered eyes
Nails longing to rip open your skin

Blood longing, rusting steel
My hands have lost all feeling

Dangling over the edge
The birds swoop and plant their claws in my flesh

…Needing just
One more breath

Longing only…
One more injection of poison into my veins.
©2004-2009 ~braceletsofsmoke
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Author's Comments

just came to me..dont ask for any explanation :p

hope the category is ok :p
'It's the gruesome arena around death and agony.' - i think it is.
'It creates and involves unpleasant emotions but is not necessarily angst or wrist slasher writing.' - well i'm a teenager so its all wrist slashing angst isnt it?! :p

we shall see!

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:iconrosebud1313:
~Rosebud1313 Jul 14, 2004, 8:30:11 PM
Nice! Very chilling...

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Love,
Sandy:rose:
:iconwardy360:
~wardy360 Jul 15, 2004, 9:40:03 AM
Interesting! evil! Cruel!

Great stuff, very simple and straight to the point!

:heart:

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I want a sexy piece of Twi'lek Ass!
:icontripleeight:
~tripleeight Jul 16, 2004, 9:48:08 AM
wow.. that's pretty powerful. I love the imagary.

"Alone in this dark room
Spiders are spinning their webs around my heart."

I love that. :)

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RUBEN@DEVIANTART
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~notrust Jul 17, 2004, 7:22:07 PM
I love the eerie flow of it, and fantastic imagery.:blackrose:

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"There is something in each of us that wants us to be Unhappy. It creates in our imaginations problems that don't yet exist- quite often causing them to come true."
~Benjamin Hoff The Te of Piglet
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~alwayzdazd Jul 18, 2004, 1:49:21 PM
nice, nice flow along with the destructive images. haunting piece.

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Am I the star beneath the stairs?

Am I a ghost upon the stage?

Am I your anything?


:iconbadblokebob:
~badblokebob Jul 19, 2004, 10:16:31 PM
Dark and disturbing :| Definitely got the right category, I think!!

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~coolositymax Aug 5, 2004, 3:12:27 PM
My my, you're a cheery soul aren't you?

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:iconamandamarie:
~amandamarie Aug 20, 2004, 7:56:56 AM
"Spiders are spinning their webs around my heart."

i absolutly love this line. the beginning of the poem is amazing,
the very last line seems kind of misplaced though.
:icondimentia:
~Dimentia Feb 6, 2005, 2:01:09 PM
This is brilliant I love it. Dark, powerful and depressing but still really like it :)
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